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Competition Showcase – Dr Murdo's Walking Stick by Sara Lee

This section of the website showcases stories by Writing Magazine competition runners-up.

Dr Murdo's Walking Stick, by Sara Lee, Bury, Lancashire, was runner-up in the WM Annual Ghost Story competition.

The winning story, Expecting, Cecilia Rose, features in the September issue of Writing Magazine.

The judging comments are on the last page
Posted: 30 August 2006
Previous Showcase stories: No Angel, Christine Sutton
Greater Love, Dawn Bush
Collision
, Fran Tracey
The Tortoiseshell Comb, Malcolm Welshman

Born in Manchester, Sara Lee has lived in the Isle of Man, in Hebden Bridge, in Todmorden and now in Bury. It was at school that she discovered her love of writing, and her English teacher was so impressed with her essays that she encouraged Sara to continue with her writing.

After school, Sara went to Secretarial College in Manchester and went from there to work in a solicitors’ office. She never lost sight of her writing ambitions and has attended a number of writing courses. Now a full-time carer for her mother, Sara still finds time for her writing.

Dr Murdo's Walking Stick

by

Sara Lee

Jack Barlow, antique dealer and opportunist, could never pass an antique shop without a look inside. Curiosities, as this one called itself, was the kind of shop he often found in such small country villages as Apley. Run by enthusiasts rather than experts, they were usually filled with junk. But occasionally, just occasionally, had made the exciting discovery of an early impressionist painting or a piece of rare German pottery worth a small fortune.
He never told the proprietor of his suspicions, and would beat down the price, even if it was just a few pounds they were asking. Curiosities held no surprises Ð cluttered as it was from floor to ceiling with car-boot objects dÕart and little else.
Strangely, he heard a womanÕs sobbing uncontrollably in the little office at the back of the shop. A manÕs voice was trying to calm her: ÔIÕll get rid of it Stephanie. I promise IÕll get rid of it.Õ Jack supposed, from the mess around him, that they were talking about an animal, and was about to leave when from the corner of his eye he saw something move threateningly towards him.
Thinking it might be a dog Ð and he was very afraid of dogs Ð he grabbed a walking stick to shoo it away. But, strangely, there was no animal there. He was about to replace the stick with others in a receptacle when he noticed with interest that it was metal, possibly silver,

and the intricate design along the stem was made up of numerous human faces, so grotesquely fashioned as to be frightening Ð like souls in torment. But the superb workmanship spoke of its quality.
‘That’s Doctor Murdo’s walking stick,’ said a voice. It was the proprietor. A small man with a moustache. ‘He was a local eccentric.’
‘Funny thing for a doctor to have.’
‘He was a Doctor of Divinity. He was once the vicar here, about three hundred years ago. They recently sold off the vicarage and its contents, some of which I bought.’
‘It’s very nice, but there is some damage to it,’ began Jack, going into his usual patter.
‘I’ll take five pounds for it,’ said the man. ‘As you rightly observed, it is damaged,’ he added, seeing Jack’s surprise.
‘Four,’ said Jack out of habit, though his heart was in his mouth with excitement.
‘If you like,’ said the man without hesitation. As Jack gave him the money, he saw that a woman was standing at the door of the little office. Her red eyes were now quite dry, but she was staring at Jack with such a guilty look that for the first time he wondered, cheap though it was, if he really was getting the bargain he imagined.
He had come to Apley for a country house sale that was due to take place early the next morning. Finding a small hotel, he booked a room for the night. A plump, friendly woman at the reception desk filled out the registration.
‘Just the one night?’ she asked.
‘Yes.’
‘And your friend also?’


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