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Competition Showcase – Terminal 90 by Barbara Wadd

 

About Barbara Wadd
Having take early retirement from her job as a District Administrator on a Fire Station, Barbara Wadd now has more time for her writing. ‘In 2007 my New Year's Resolution was to enter all the monthly competitions in Writers’ News and Writing Magazine which I have continued through 2008, she says. My success tally so far in short stories is four shortlistings, two wins and now one second place. And in poetry, shortlisted six times. I am finding it invaluable experience.
I have had two walking books published: Ghosts Walks in Derbyshire and a sequel and I am currently working on Ghost Walks in Leicestershire.
I have written a novel and a diary of a Carer, of the time I cared for my Mum, but those are just collecting rejections slips at present as are my story submissions to magazines but I have found that if you persevere, eventually you succeed, particularly if you take a hard look at your work and compare it to other people's and recognise how you can improve it.’

Terminal 90

by Barbara Wadd



Harry awoke, as he always did, at the ping of the Robo-tea signalling his drink was ready. As he sat up on the sleep shelf, the light changed from dim to daylight and the view panel on the end wall simulated blue sky with fluffy white clouds as usual.
He reached for his non-spill drink dispenser and the robo-arm extended towards him. He sipped it and pulled a face. Luke-warm thanks to the Safety Police and tasting nothing like the chicory blitz he was sure he dialled in last night.
He sighed. It was his ninetieth birthday. Hard to believe where the years had gone. This was the day that he had to leave his mono-unit and move to the designated multiplex where all his needs would be taken care of, or so his personal oracle had been telling him for the last few weeks. It had even counted down the days for him until this momentous event.
As he sipped the rapidly cooling liquid he thought back over his life. He had been a millennium baby, born as the last strokes of Big Ben had died away. He smiled, wondering how many people remembered the famous old clock these days. Very few he thought. Images of the old world, as it was referred to, were strictly controlled by the Media Police.
It was as though everyone was celebrating his birth, or so his mother had told him, with the skies erupting in fireworks, heralding the new age. The twenty-first century which had promised so much. Harry shook his head. How could humanity get it so wrong?
His early years were okay. There had been concern about global warming and wars in the planet’s hotspots but in those days there had been the will to try to make a better world, or was that just him seeing it through the rosy glow of distant decades?
It was in his late teens that things had become unglued.
First the religious riots had ripped apart countries. Then, fuelled by uncontrolled immigration, systems had broken down, leading to mass shortages. Too many people chased too few jobs, fought for accommodation, battled for eco fuel for the cars that clogged the overloaded transport network.
The Food Frenzies of his twenties, when thousands had starved to death and feral gangs had roamed the streets, he skimmed over in his mind. He had lost too many people close to him during that time to want to dwell on it.
Not that the thirties had been any better. It had seemed that the whole world was grinding to a halt. Bursting with people, and in particular pensioners, or so the SatView would have you believe. Of course the cures for cancer and the cloning of replacement body parts had removed many of the main causes of death, so people were living much longer. But Harry had thought it was a little unfair to blame it all on the elderly. In his opinion an uncontrolled birth rate had led to meltdown.
And that was when Melissa Broome had appeared on the political scene. May 2040 with her Neoteric Party. Of course the SatNews had immediately dubbed her New Broom, as if they had come up with something innovative, although other less enamoured pundits had called her Witch’s Broom. But her ideas were radical, her proposals harsh and uncompromising and she swept to global power on a landslide victory.
Her view was that there were no universal rights. Everything had to be earned, whether it was freedom, food, housing and even life. For the majority of people, she said, freedom was too difficult a concept to handle. Given too much freedom they ran amok therefore that was the first thing to go out the window. Not that many of the population had windows these days since they lived deep in boxes in the huge accom-units underground.
For the first ten years martial law had been in force. Everyone had to be chipped which meant they had a micro chip inserted in the palm of their hand and this controlled their access to … well, everything. Housing, transport, healthcare, clothing, food, drink and entertainment all had to paid through it and it had to be loaded with credit by work they did. It also contained comprehensive information about them and transmitted their whereabouts at all times. Attempts to remove it resulted in a shot of cyanide, although this wasn’t told to anyone in the early days. It only came to light when a few people tried home surgery.
As soon as they were chipped they were assigned jobs and a massive building programme swept into place. The invention of the wonder material Duralum revolutionised production of all manner of goods. Easily moulded, the robotic factories could pump out thousands of pressings a days. And the lightweight material could be handled by the mass labour force that the government could command at the drop of a chip.
Vast precincts where people lived, worked and spent their leisure time were created. Dubbed as warrens by the populace, Harry had spent the last fifty years in one or another of them. It made little difference as they were all built to a similar spec.
Breeding was banned. Only those with a special permit were allowed to reproduce and then only under strictly controlled conditions.
People were allocated accommodation according to their needs. A single box unit in Harry’s case. This came equipped with SatView so they could receive government information. Any additional entertainment viewing had to be paid for by credits earned and loaded onto their chip. The same applied to the food and drink dispenser with its extensive menu which unfortunately all came out tainted with the plastic taste of Duralum.
Harry had survived and adapted. There hadn’t been any choice. But occasionally he wondered what it would have been like to live above ground and explore the world that had existed in the last century that his mother had told him about.
He looked at the Duralum cases that contained his few possessions, neatly stacked in the corner of his unit. They would be sent to his new accommodation or so the Oracle had told him.
It had been a month ago that he’d received his instructions.
‘On your ninetieth birthday you are required to vacate this unit and move to your designated complex where your needs will be assessed and you will be allocated appropriate accommodation.’
The screen had droned on with precise instructions for the vacation of the unit, the packing of belongings and how Harry was to proceed to his new place.
According to the blurb all his future needs would be met in his new home. He wondered how it was funded. Had a percentage of his past credits been siphoned off in anticipation of his having to pay for it, or did the government have a surplus of credits that they used for it?
Harry had seen the pictures of where he was to go. It looked wonderful. Full of smiling Seniors, enjoying a multitude of entertainments and pleasures that their life’s work had earned them. Round the clock medical facilities would repair their aging bodies and fully automated staffing cater to their needs. Since Harry could hope to live for another forty or so years, he could look forward to a long and satisfying nonployment.
It was however a one way journey and once there Harry would have to remain within its confines. The Info tube said it was not economically viable to have people wandering the globe, using up limited resources. Still, Harry thought, it looked as though everything he needed would be right outside his slider.
As he dialled in his breakfast and waited for the robochef to produce it with its usual whirr and gurgle, he requested the view screen to display his travel instructions.
They would take him to an area he had not been to before, in the Alpha sector and up to level one hundred. From there it said a bounce tube would transit him to his point of departure at Terminal 90.
He finished his GrainyFru which was said to contain all the vitamins he needed to sustain his healthy life and dropped the dish in the recycler.
Time to go, he thought. He took one last look around the unit but it was bare now his personal items were packed and he felt little regret at leaving it. The door slid open as he passed his palm over the eye and swished shut behind him. He stepped on the travellator and from there entered a single hub car. He strapped himself in and punched in the code he had been given for Alpha 100. The car accelerated smoothly until the passing walkways became a blur and the windows opaqued.
Finally the car slowed and stopped, the door slid open and the robovoice announced that he had reached his destination.
He clambered out and immediately in front of him was a sign: ‘Terminal 90 This Way.’ He stepped on a moving walkway and eventually arrived at a row of booths. There was a short queue of people who moved forward as the number of a booth flashed up on the view screen.
Harry looked around at them, wondering if they were being assigned to his complex. He supposed they were all his age, hence the designation Terminal 90. It made sense that they would all go through the same place and be bounced up to wherever they would spend the rest of their days.
As his turn grew closer his heart started drumming in his chest. At last he faced the screen and number 4 flashed up. He made his way to the booth, stepping inside and the door closed behind him. He took a seat and fastened the safety strap, wondering what the bounce tube would feel like.
It was only as the gas started to hiss through the vents and fill the booth that he realised why it was called Terminal.


Judging comment
The first problem faced by anyone who sets out to write fantasy or science fiction is creating the world that is going to be the setting for their story. This can be especially difficult in the short story, because the writer has only a limited number of worlds in which to create this new world. That problem, however, was neatly met by Barbara Wad in her second-prize winning story in the New Broom competition announced in Writers’ News last May.
Barbara simply borrowed our existing world, the one we already know about, and took it forward to 2090. That is some eighty years away: far enough for the world to have changed totally, near enough for us to wonder what sort of world our grandchildren might be inheriting. A well chosen distance, and one that provides Barbara with a fictional world with benchmarks to which we can all relate.
Some thirty years from now, in 2040, Melissa Broom (the New Broom of the story’s theme) had swept into power. The problems her Neoteric party faced are ones we can understand here and now in 2008: global warming, over population, uncontrolled immigration, critical food shortages. It all sounds depressingly familiar, and it makes Barbara Wadd’s brave new world totally believable.
She creates a world in which everything is controlled by the state: food, work, leisure, even human reproduction. It’s a scenario that, today, we would not dismiss as being impossible and that is what makes Barbara’s fantasy world so credible.
Even the grisly ending has a disturbing credibility: some government in a terrifying vision of the future may well decide that we should all be disposed of once we reach an age at which we are no longer economically viable. Suddenly I feel lucky that I will never see 2090!